• Present your experiments in groups; clarify the aim; discuss with group-mates:
    • Purpose: I will create a concrete poem: a single, visual screen, setting the text of my fragmented "Poet's Eye" poem using Gimp to set layers, abstract shapes, in dark gray-scale to emphasize the theme of taming a frenzied world
    • Workshop:
      • How does the text current work towards the aims of the work?
        • What are some strong points?
        • What kinds of changes could allow it to better fit the medium?
      • How does the visual presentation work towards the aims of the work?
        • What choices were made and how do they effect a reader/viewer
        • What further work on the visual setting could allow for a better fit with the text and aim?